we are working on expanding our writing to give more depth. We used the sentence a mn walked up a hill and looked out at the sea.
A man walked briskly up a steep hill on a cold winters morning, the gentle crunch of snow from under his boots filled the silence as he finally reached the peek. The air was empty as he gazed far over the grey, motionless sea. He looked around desperately he needed that key, now his life depended on it.
